April 9, 2005

Back then


Back then, when I was young
When lies couldn't blind us or tear us apart
Back then I thought I had stolen a heart,
But later I found out he had stolen mine

Did he returned it afterwards? Oh no
He took all away and I was feeling cold
Only broken pieces of the one I used to love
Only shattered dreams and years left to go

He came back and then I forgot
About the way it hurt to let him go
About the way it ached to feel him away
I wish he didn't complete me in every way


Back then I was silly and naïve
Back then I was partially blind
And now... now I'm still naïve
Still silly and, most of all, still blind

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I'm going to assume that you wrote it and say your a great writer once more. I love it!

Anonymous said...

It's such a beautiful poem!!! I wish I would have such writers talent...You rock girl!
Thanks for your sweet comment about my new layout :)
xxx Lotte

Anonymous said...

Wow i love it did you write it...
it's great!!
love nic.

Anonymous said...

beautifull!!

Anonymous said...

Thank you, thank you, thank you girls! :D

Yeah, you're assuming correctly Ali.. I wrote this ;) I'm glad you like it

Lotte.. Me?? Talented? No way! Your layout looks great, I liked it!

Sissie! Thanx for reading my writing, I appreciate your comment :D